Explain what the paragraph is trying to say and how can it be improved?

  • Verma
    Asked on February 26, 2021 at 9:01 PM

    Hello, I have seen the number 5 graph (A confusing and aesthetically unappealing graphic) and I feel it is confusing, too. Is there any chance that could explain what the graph is trying to say and how can it be improved?Thank you,
    Neha

  • Vanessa_T
    Replied on February 27, 2021 at 4:44 AM

    Please note that the graph is only displayed for sample purposes. The article simply shows a sample of what a confusing graphic looks like. Unfortunately, we do not have details of what exactly the graph is about.

    Meanwhile, as to how it can be improved, as suggested by Ed Cook: "It should be broken up into at least two visuals so the message isn’t lost".