Can I change the text of "EDIT THIS SUBMISSION"?

Can I change the text of "EDIT THIS SUBMISSION"?  to say something else like "CLICK HERE TO ACCEPT"

It should still forward to the same edit submission page

Yes, you can.

Just link the text to the following URL:

https://www.jotform.com/edit/{id} 

{id} means the Submission ID that is automatically generated for each submission in the form.